Hey guys.
Today i am going to publish my best poem written this term. It is called "When i was a boy.":
When I was a boy
I lived at my godmother's house.
As i went through the door,
The smell of pie surrounded me.
I went through to the kitchen door,
my hands scraping the wall
tickling my back with shudder.
The loud noise of the TV,
And the soft swiff of someone
sitting on the couch.
The head landing on a cushion making a puff
that was covered by "Goal" on the screen.
I went back outside and the fresh air and cold pine smell
came over me.
The tic-tic-ping of my dad on the ping-pong table
playing with his brother,
reminded me of my alarm in the morning.
I climbed up the cherry tree,
to pick up one of his juicy fruits.
As i bit into it,
a long red drip sploshed onto my shirt,
forming a love heart shaped spot.
flowers on the ground, the stripped insects
rushing, collecting nectar made a familiar noise.
The blossomed flowers,
full of different colors,
flashed my face like the sun,
on the reflected water,
of the turtle pond.
The tickling of the pines,
made me feel
like i was in my mum's arms.
So there you go!
That is my favorite poem because i liked the way i felt when i wrote it and i like the way i feel when i read it.
What is your favorite poem?
Bye
